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2014-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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What are the things that you dislike in a person? This question is very difficult for me. Always, I try to find the strong points in a person. Sometimes, I failed to do so. Maybe, because he was not at all open, I was not able to communicate with him. To not be able to communicate is the thing that I dislike in a person.

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Good afternoon Sir [이름]!   Happy hump day again! I am so sorry for not being able to attend our class yesterday. I had to go home because my daughter was sick and no one\'s gonna take good care of her since her grandmother was sick too. Anyway, I do hope you understand.   Well, thanks you so much for sending in your homework. It is just normal to dislike some things in a person because we are just human beings.   See you later!   ~Teacher Shanee   What are the things that you dislike in a person?This question is very difficult for me. >>> Correct!Always, I try to find the strong points in a person. >>> I always try to find the strong points of a person.Sometimes, I failed to do so. >>> Correct!Maybe, because he was not at all open, I was not able to communicate with him. >>> It is maybe because he was not open at all that I wasn\'t able to communicate with him.To not be able to communicate is the thing that I dislike in a person. >>> Correct!>>> OR: Not being able to communicate is one thing that I don\'t like in a person.

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