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Q : Poor people have more difficult lives than rich people. A : I agree it because when I was a young, my family was very poor. I was shy with poor of my family because I was a young. These days, still many people are living difficult. In society today, many people need a lot of things. For example, our educational background, license, good appearance etc. So many people need some money to get these things. Rich people can get easier it than poor people. sometimes poor people often can't have a chance. Rich parents' children are the rich like their parents. I was angry about it. I hope that all people of the world will be happy and rich.

Hi [이름]! ^^Wow! Thank you so much for sharing to me your opinion about the topic.I like it because it is long and detailed. Well, I believe that those rich people wereborn poor but they did their best to become rich. So, we can follow their footsteps if we want to be rich like them. It only needs intelligence and perseverance. We have to think positive and follow the right path. By the way, please study the following corrections, below.Take care always and have a blessed fay ahead. ^^~~Teacher Kris I agree it because when I was a young, my family was very poor.>> I agree, because when I was young, my family was very poor.I was shy with poor of my family because I was a young.>> I was shy because my family was very poor.These days, still many people are living difficult.>> These days, still many people live in difficulties.In society today, many people need a lot of things.>> CorrectFor example, our educational background, license, good appearance etc.>> CorrectSo many people need some money to get these things.>> So, many people need some money to avail these things.Rich people can get easier it than poor people.>> Rich people can get it easier than poor people.sometimes poor people often can\'t have a chance.>> Sometimes, poor people often can\'t have the chance.Rich parents\' children are the rich like their parents. I was angry about it.>> Children who were born rich will be like their parents. I was angry about it.I hope that all people of the world will be happy and rich.>> Correct