homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening and a merry Tuesday to you TOM!
How are you doing today?
I am glad that you took the class with me.
You did great in class as well as with your homework.
Though, some words weren\'t suitable for your sentences.
I was able to get what you want to express. If you have any questions about it.
Please feel free to tell me in class, okay?
I hope that you are having a wonderful day.
Teacher Nina
The boy heart her eyes in the gymnasium.
>> Did you mean: They boy\'s heart was in the gymnasium.
We should eat rice cake on holidays.
>> correct
We must have a effort to success.
>> We must make an effort to be successful.
it is young female and 4.5m long 1.5t.
>> Did you mean: It is 4.5 m tall and 1.5 wide.
>> OR: It is a young female crocodile, 4.5 m tall and 1.5 wide.
THe least number from 1 to 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000 is 1.
>> correct
Nile crocodile is very bid and heavy.
>> Did you mean: Nile crocodile is very big and heavy.
It is usaually 5~7m and 1~3T.
>> It is usually five to seven meters and one to three tons.
When it bite the meat it will crush and be torn and can\'t reconize the shape.
>> When it bites the meat, it will be crushed, torn into pieces that you can\'t recognize the shape anymore.
It bite almost as almost one ton.
>> When it bites, the weight is almost one ton.
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