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2014-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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The boy heart her eyes in the gymnasium. We should eat rice cake on holidays. We must have a effort to success. it is young female and 4.5m long 1.5t. THe least number from 1 to 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000 is 1. Nile crocodile is very bid and heavy. It is usaually 5~7m and 1~3T. When it bite the meat it will crush and be torn and can't reconize the shape. It bite almost as almost one ton.

강사 첨삭

Good evening and a merry Tuesday to you TOM!

How are you doing today?

I am glad that you took the class with me.
You did great in class as well as with your homework.

Though, some words weren\'t suitable for your sentences.
I was able to get what you want to express. If you have any questions about it.

Please feel free to tell me in class, okay?

I hope that you are having a wonderful day.

Teacher Nina


The boy heart her eyes in the gymnasium.

>> Did you mean: They boy\'s heart was in the gymnasium.
We should eat rice cake on holidays.

>> correct 
We must have a effort to success.

>> We must make an effort to be successful.
it is young female and 4.5m long 1.5t.

>> Did you mean: It is 4.5 m tall and 1.5 wide.

>> OR: It is a young female crocodile, 4.5 m tall and 1.5 wide.
THe least number from 1 to 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000 is 1.
>> correct 


Nile crocodile is very bid and heavy.

>> Did you mean: Nile crocodile is very big and heavy.
It is usaually 5~7m and 1~3T.

>> It is usually five to seven meters and one to three tons.
When it bite the meat it will crush and be torn and can\'t reconize the shape.

>> When it bites the meat, it will be crushed, torn into pieces that you can\'t recognize the shape anymore.
It bite almost as almost one ton.

>> When it bites, the weight is almost one ton.

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