Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there Jessie!
Thank you for realizing my effort! :D
How did you know that? When I'm stuck to say my opinon, so I don't know how to explain, I'm a little disappointed. But thanks to you, I can get confidence.
Yup! Then take care till tomorrow!
<Essay>
Not to throw out trash! Many people throw out everywhere when trash can is even near by. I can't understand why people do like that! And to save water is also the best way to decrease the pollution I think.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
I know how you feel because sometimes, I also feel the same way as you do.
Anyway, those are simple ways but I believe that it still helps.
So better keep that up!
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hi there Jessie!
>> Correct!
Thank you for realizing my effort! :D
>> Correct!
How did you know that?
>> Correct!
When I\'m stuck to say my opinon, so I don\'t know how to explain, I\'m a little disappointed.
>> When I\'m stuck to say my opinion, so I don\'t know how to explain, I\'m a little disappointed.
But thanks to you, I can get confidence.
>> Correct!
Yup!
>> Correct!
Then take care till tomorrow!
>> Correct!
<Essay>
Not to throw out trash!
>> Correct!
OR>> Not to throw trash everywhere.
Many people throw out everywhere when trash can is even near by.
>> Many people throw out trash anywhere even if there is a trash can near them.
I can\'t understand why people do like that!
>> Correct!
OR>> I can\'t understand why people do that!
And to save water is also the best way to decrease the pollution I think.
>> Correct!
I know how you feel because sometimes, I also feel the same way as you do.
Anyway, those are simple ways but I believe that it still helps.
So better keep that up!
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hi there Jessie!
>> Correct!
Thank you for realizing my effort! :D
>> Correct!
How did you know that?
>> Correct!
When I\'m stuck to say my opinon, so I don\'t know how to explain, I\'m a little disappointed.
>> When I\'m stuck to say my opinion, so I don\'t know how to explain, I\'m a little disappointed.
But thanks to you, I can get confidence.
>> Correct!
Yup!
>> Correct!
Then take care till tomorrow!
>> Correct!
<Essay>
Not to throw out trash!
>> Correct!
OR>> Not to throw trash everywhere.
Many people throw out everywhere when trash can is even near by.
>> Many people throw out trash anywhere even if there is a trash can near them.
I can\'t understand why people do like that!
>> Correct!
OR>> I can\'t understand why people do that!
And to save water is also the best way to decrease the pollution I think.
>> Correct!
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