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Do you think it is important to have a sense of humor? (Why)?
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I think a sense of humor is essential to keep good relationships with people, especially clients.
Because I believe that a sense of humor during talking with them acts like lubricant and it makes moods soft.
Moreover I’ve seen much that most successful people have a sense of humor and they can use it accordingly during doing a business.
So I think a sense of humor is one of key for success in life.
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Happy mid-week Mr. [이름]!
First and foremost, thank you so much for re-enrolling.
I deeply and sincerely appreciate that. :)
Speaking of sense of humor, I think you are one of those people who have this! :D
Yes! You are a great conversant plus, you always make me laugh or smile.
I truly believe that this personality of yours will bring you further in life!
Keep smiling! :D
__T. Myra__
Do you think it is important to have a sense of humor? (Why)?
I think a sense of humor is essential to keep good relationships with people, especially clients.
>>CORRECT
BETTER: I think a sense of humor is essential to keep good relationships with people, especially to our clients.
OR: I think having a good sense of humor is essential to keep good relationships with people, especially to our clients.
Because I believe that a sense of humor during talking with them acts like lubricant and it makes moods soft.
>>Because I believe that a sense of humor whenever we talk with them acts like lubricant and it makes the mood soft. (or light)
Moreover I’ve seen much that most successful people have a sense of humor and they can use it accordingly during doing a business.
>>Moreover I’ve seen much that most successful people have a sense of humor and they can use it accordingly in business.
So I think a sense of humor is one of key for success in life.
>>So, I think a sense of humor is one of the keys to have success in life.
OR: So, I think a sense of humor is one of the keys for a successful life.
First and foremost, thank you so much for re-enrolling.
I deeply and sincerely appreciate that. :)
Speaking of sense of humor, I think you are one of those people who have this! :D
Yes! You are a great conversant plus, you always make me laugh or smile.
I truly believe that this personality of yours will bring you further in life!
Keep smiling! :D
__T. Myra__
Do you think it is important to have a sense of humor? (Why)?
I think a sense of humor is essential to keep good relationships with people, especially clients.
>>CORRECT
BETTER: I think a sense of humor is essential to keep good relationships with people, especially to our clients.
OR: I think having a good sense of humor is essential to keep good relationships with people, especially to our clients.
Because I believe that a sense of humor during talking with them acts like lubricant and it makes moods soft.
>>Because I believe that a sense of humor whenever we talk with them acts like lubricant and it makes the mood soft. (or light)
Moreover I’ve seen much that most successful people have a sense of humor and they can use it accordingly during doing a business.
>>Moreover I’ve seen much that most successful people have a sense of humor and they can use it accordingly in business.
So I think a sense of humor is one of key for success in life.
>>So, I think a sense of humor is one of the keys to have success in life.
OR: So, I think a sense of humor is one of the keys for a successful life.
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