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2014-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Hi Erine I don't want to delay my class. But I cannot have to delay it. Because My phone was broken. I don‘t know the reason. I just did my I-phone software update. And then My phone was down. 1. If you set up a business, it's generally to make money. 2. I can't give the answer right away. I'll have to do some research. 3. I'm very pleased with the result. You make a great job! 4. When I make a mistake, my teacher corrects me and explains why. 5. What are you studying? I'm making a degree in history.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! Is you phone ok now? I hope you were able to have your phone fixed. I am already missing our conversations. Maybe your phone needs an upgrade!^^ You have you buy a new phone!^^ kkk Just kidding!^>^ See you tomorrow. ~~Teacher Erine~~ Hi Erine >> Hi, Erine.I don\'t want to delay my class. >> I didn\'t want to delay my class. But I cannot have to delay it. >> But I cannot stop from doing it. Because My phone was broken. >> Because my phone was broken. I don‘t know the reason. >> Correct. I just did my I-phone software update. >> Correct. And then My phone was down. >> And then my phone got down.1. If you set up a business, it\'s generally to make money. >>Correct2. I can\'t give the answer right away. I\'ll have to do some research. >>Correct3. I\'m very pleased with the result. You make a great job! >>Did4. When I make a mistake, my teacher corrects me and explains why. >>Correct5. What are you studying? I\'m making a degree in history. >>doing

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