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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Erine
I don't want to delay my class. But I cannot have to delay it. Because My phone was broken. I don‘t know the reason. I just did my I-phone software update. And then My phone was down.
1. If you set up a business, it's generally to make money.
2. I can't give the answer right away. I'll have to do some research.
3. I'm very pleased with the result. You make a great job!
4. When I make a mistake, my teacher corrects me and explains why.
5. What are you studying? I'm making a degree in history.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Is you phone ok now? I hope you were able to have your phone fixed.
I am already missing our conversations.
Maybe your phone needs an upgrade!^^ You
have you buy a new phone!^^ kkk
Just kidding!^>^
See you tomorrow. ~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi Erine
>> Hi, Erine.I don\'t want to delay my class.
>> I didn\'t want to delay my class.
But I cannot have to delay it.
>> But I cannot stop from doing it.
Because My phone was broken.
>> Because my phone was broken.
I don‘t know the reason.
>> Correct.
I just did my I-phone software update.
>> Correct.
And then My phone was down.
>> And then my phone got down.1. If you set up a business, it\'s generally to make money.
>>Correct2. I can\'t give the answer right away. I\'ll have to do some research.
>>Correct3. I\'m very pleased with the result. You make a great job!
>>Did4. When I make a mistake, my teacher corrects me and explains why.
>>Correct5. What are you studying? I\'m making a degree in history.
>>doing
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