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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~ Jessie.
Today, I made a lot of grammar mistakes, didn't I? Everytime after I say, I realize that I commit a grammar error. Although I know how to say, it's really short time for me to think of all correctly. But I believe that practice can make me improve my skill.
I'll check the modification which you made again and again. Then I'm gonna make less errors, right? :D
Thank you for noticing me my errors. See u!
<Essay>
I have never been to a fortune teller yet. Above all things, I don't believe fortune tellers. If their words were true, I think it is a kind of tricks. Have you been to them before? If you have experiece, tell me yours! I'm curious how it was.
강사 첨삭
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I am grateful that you have a positive attitude.
Yes, of course you will get better and better.
You have the potential to be better. Always remember that! ^_^
I actually never experienced going to a fortune teller. You know that I am a Christian, right?
But sometimes, I\'ve thought of going there just for fun or because of my curiosity.
Shall we do it together? hahha
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hi~ Jessie.
>> Correct!
Today, I made a lot of grammar mistakes, didn\'t I?
>> Correct!
Everytime after I say, I realize that I commit a grammar error.
>> Every time I tell you something, I realize that I committed a grammar error after I say it.
Although I know how to say, it\'s really short time for me to think of all correctly.
>> Although I know how to say it, the time is not enough for me to think of them all correctly.
But I believe that practice can make me improve my skill.
>> Correct!
I\'ll check the modification which you made again and again.
>> I\'ll check the modifications which you made again and again.
Then I\'m gonna make less errors, right? :D
>> Correct!
OR>> Then I\'m going to make less errors, right?
Thank you for noticing me my errors.
>> Thank you for noticing my errors.
See u!
>> See you!
<Essay>
I have never been to a fortune teller yet.
>> Correct!
Above all things, I don\'t believe fortune tellers.
>> Correct!
If their words were true, I think it is a kind of tricks.
>> If their words came true, I think it is a kind of trick.
Have you been to them before?
>> Correct!
If you have experiece, tell me yours!
>> If you have experienced it, tell me yours!
I\'m curious how it was.
>> Correct!
I am grateful that you have a positive attitude.
Yes, of course you will get better and better.
You have the potential to be better. Always remember that! ^_^
I actually never experienced going to a fortune teller. You know that I am a Christian, right?
But sometimes, I\'ve thought of going there just for fun or because of my curiosity.
Shall we do it together? hahha
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hi~ Jessie.
>> Correct!
Today, I made a lot of grammar mistakes, didn\'t I?
>> Correct!
Everytime after I say, I realize that I commit a grammar error.
>> Every time I tell you something, I realize that I committed a grammar error after I say it.
Although I know how to say, it\'s really short time for me to think of all correctly.
>> Although I know how to say it, the time is not enough for me to think of them all correctly.
But I believe that practice can make me improve my skill.
>> Correct!
I\'ll check the modification which you made again and again.
>> I\'ll check the modifications which you made again and again.
Then I\'m gonna make less errors, right? :D
>> Correct!
OR>> Then I\'m going to make less errors, right?
Thank you for noticing me my errors.
>> Thank you for noticing my errors.
See u!
>> See you!
<Essay>
I have never been to a fortune teller yet.
>> Correct!
Above all things, I don\'t believe fortune tellers.
>> Correct!
If their words were true, I think it is a kind of tricks.
>> If their words came true, I think it is a kind of trick.
Have you been to them before?
>> Correct!
If you have experiece, tell me yours!
>> If you have experienced it, tell me yours!
I\'m curious how it was.
>> Correct!
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