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I read a book which is story of witches. I sometimes listened to CD and read the book for a month. Here is the story. Once upon a time, twenty women were with in the prison. Jennet is one of the prisoners. When she was young, she was very poor and she often ill. Also she believed that her family is witches. So, Jennet told judge her family was witches because she was young. So, her family died. She grew up in judge's house. There was warm and a lot of housework to do but she was happy. One day, a child told villagers Jennet was a witch but this story was lie. Villagers didn't believed it because they hated Jennet. Judge didn't help her because he died. So, Jennet was in the prison. She thought that she told judge lie about her family was witches and the child told villagers lie about Jennet was a witch. She knew that she will stay in the prison a long time and she had to remmber her family until the last day of her life.

Hi [이름]! ^^ Thank you so much for making your homework. I really like the story. It\'s dramatic but the story of good, I wish I could read that story about  witches. Who is the author, by the way? I would like to read it as well. By the way, please study the following corrections below, okay. Take care and have a great day ahead. ~~Teacher Kris I read a book which is story of witches. >> I read a book which is all about a story of witches.I sometimes listened to CD and read the book for a month. >> CorrectHere is the story. >> CorrectOnce upon a time, twenty women were with in the prison. >> Once upon a time, twenty women were in the prison.Jennet is one of the prisoners. >> CorrectWhen she was young, she was very poor and she often ill.  >> When she was young, she was very poor and she often got ill. Also she believed that her family is witches. >> Also she believed that her family are witches.So, Jennet told judge her family was witches because she was young. >> So, since Jennet was young, she accidentally told the judge that her family members are witches.So, her family died. She grew up in judge\'s house. >> So, her family were murdered. She grew up in Judge\'s house.There was warm and a lot of housework to do but she was happy. >> There were a lot of housework to do but she was happy.One day, a child told villagers Jennet was a witch but this story was lie. >> One day, a child told the villagers that Jennet was a witch but this story was a lie.Villagers didn\'t believed it because they hated Jennet. >> The villagers believed it because they hated Jennet.Judge didn\'t help her because he died. >> The judge couldn\'t help her because he is dead.So, Jennet was in the prison.  >> Correct >> OR: So, Jennet was put to prison. She thought that she told judge lie about her family was witches and the child told villagers lie about Jennet was a witch. >> Jennet was only lying about her family were witches. The child also told a lie to the villagers that Jennet was a witch.She knew that she will stay in the prison a long time and she had to remmber her family until the last day of her life. >> She knew that she will stay in the prison for a long time and she had to remember her family until the last day of her life.