Homework
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Do you follow all of your country’s traditional customs? Why or why not?
Realistically speaking, I do not follow many parts of my country's traditional customs. Lots of reasons, but the most important reason is that times change.
I am not living in a traditional living arrangement.
Family structure and town community are the basis of traditional customs.
But family structure changed and town community disappeared.
I am living without restriction of traditional family and town.
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Do you follow all of your country’s traditional customs? Why or why not?Realistically speaking, I do not follow many parts of my country\'s traditional customs.
>>> Correct!
Lots of reasons, but the most important reason is that times change.
>>> Theere are lots of reasons but the most important is that time\'s changing.I am not living in a traditional living arrangement.
>>> Correct! Family structure and town community are the basis of traditional customs.
>>> Correct! [bases:plural]But family structure changed and town community disappeared.
>>> But the family structure changed and town communities disappered.I am living without restriction of traditional family and town.
>>> Correct!
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