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2014-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Do you follow all of your country’s traditional customs? Why or why not? Realistically speaking, I do not follow many parts of my country's traditional customs. Lots of reasons, but the most important reason is that times change. I am not living in a traditional living arrangement. Family structure and town community are the basis of traditional customs. But family structure changed and town community disappeared. I am living without restriction of traditional family and town.

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Hello there Sir [이름]!   It\'s really heartwarming to always see your homework. You never failed in accomplishing the homework that I am giving you. Thank you very much! I hope that you will always be responsible.   Have a great day! ~Teacher Shanee   Do you follow all of your country’s traditional customs? Why or why not?Realistically speaking, I do not follow many parts of my country\'s traditional customs. >>> Correct! Lots of reasons, but the most important reason is that times change. >>> Theere are lots of reasons but the most important is that time\'s changing.I am not living in a traditional living arrangement. >>> Correct! Family structure and town community are the basis of traditional customs. >>> Correct! [bases:plural]But family structure changed and town community disappeared. >>> But the family structure changed and town communities disappered.I am living without restriction of traditional family and town. >>> Correct!

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