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2014-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Do you need to take risks to be better at English? Yes, I do. I need to take risks to be better at English. However, It is not easy to break what I did in past days. All most people find the way what they are stable and comfortable. So do I. I want to try new eays but my body follows what I did before. I am very nervous when I think about this one. I feel like I am improving and learning. The way how I speak os always that same. Whenever these pop in my mind, I try to control myself and think about what my teachers told me before. "Practice makes perfect" I totally believe in this! I will practice and I believe that I will be better someday! Is my answer correct? If it is out ot topic, please tell me! Thanks always!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!

There is no wrong or correct answer when it comes to sharing your thoughts with regards to the topic.

Because it depends on how you answer the  topic given.

What I have understood in your answer is that some people tend to be more comfortable on their learning technique so they do not want to take risk in trying other things.

Maybe because they are afraid that they would fail or maybe they are just really accustomed to the old ones.

And for you, you want to try to take risks in doing some other things to improve your English skills but it is still hard. Isn\'t it?

But as they say, there is no harm in trying too.

Learning English and be better at it is like doing an experiment too.

You need to mixed, add, remove some things to make an experiment better.

It is the same with learning and becoming better in English.
You also need to add or remove or mix something and be used to it.

Well, thanks for your time today and see you again tomorrow!

Thank you!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


Do you need to take risks to be better at English?

Yes, I do. 

>> correct!
  I need to take risks to be better at English.

>> correct!

However, It is not easy to break what I did in past days.

>> However, it is not easy to break the things I did in the past.

All most people find the way what they are stable and comfortable. So do I.

>> Almost all people would find a way where they would feel stable and comfortable. So do I,

I want to try new eays but my body follows what I did before.

>> I want to try new ways but my body seems like to do what I did before.
  I am very nervous when I think about this one.

>> correct!

I feel like I am improving and learning.

>> correct!

The way how I speak os always that same.

>> But the way I speak is still the same.

Whenever these pop in my mind, I try to control myself and think about what my teachers told me before.

>> Whenever this thing pops in my head, I try to control myself and think about what my teachers told me before.
  \"Practice makes perfect\" I totally believe in this!

>> correct!

I will practice and I believe that I will be better someday!
>> correct! 
  Is my answer correct? If it is out ot topic, please tell me!

>> Is my answer correct or out of the topic, please tell me!
  Thanks always!

>> correct! 

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