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Hi! Jessie.
Wow, I first couldn't understand the reason you used French, but I could also realize that I mistook jolly for jolie soon. This is an woman form of joli in French and means beautiful. Ah... I think it is aftereffect of French exam. haha
I'd welcome any your advice about my grammar errosr!
Thank you and see ya~
<Essay>
Um... I haven't ever put on my weight becasue of stress. But it's sure that there are some people getting weight when they're stressed. I think that this is because many people eat so much to relieve their stress. Are you this type of person, too?
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
I wish I know how to speak French.
Anyway, thanks for sharing that word. At least I know one more word.
I think I only know one word, it\'s \"bonjour.\" Hahaha
Anyway, let\'s enjoy this day!
Talk to you on Monday!
~T. Jessie~
Hi! Jessie.
>> Correct!
Wow, I first couldn\'t understand the reason you used French, but I could also realize that I mistook jolly for jolie soon.
>> Wow, at first, I couldn\'t understand why you used French, but I soon realized that I mistook jolly for jolie.
This is an woman form of joli in French and means beautiful.
>> This is a woman form of joli in French and it means beautiful.
Ah... I think it is aftereffect of French exam. haha
>> Ah... I think it is the aftereffect of my French exam. haha
I\'d welcome any your advice about my grammar errosr!
>> I\'d welcome any of your advices about my grammar errors!
Thank you and see ya~
>> Thank you and see you!
<Essay>
Um... I haven\'t ever put on my weight becasue of stress.
>> I have never put on weight because of stress.
But it\'s sure that there are some people getting weight when they\'re stressed.
>> But I\'m sure that there are some people who gain weight when they\'re stressed.
I think that this is because many people eat so much to relieve their stress.
>> Correct!
Are you this type of person, too?
>> Are you this type of person too?
I wish I know how to speak French.
Anyway, thanks for sharing that word. At least I know one more word.
I think I only know one word, it\'s \"bonjour.\" Hahaha
Anyway, let\'s enjoy this day!
Talk to you on Monday!
~T. Jessie~
Hi! Jessie.
>> Correct!
Wow, I first couldn\'t understand the reason you used French, but I could also realize that I mistook jolly for jolie soon.
>> Wow, at first, I couldn\'t understand why you used French, but I soon realized that I mistook jolly for jolie.
This is an woman form of joli in French and means beautiful.
>> This is a woman form of joli in French and it means beautiful.
Ah... I think it is aftereffect of French exam. haha
>> Ah... I think it is the aftereffect of my French exam. haha
I\'d welcome any your advice about my grammar errosr!
>> I\'d welcome any of your advices about my grammar errors!
Thank you and see ya~
>> Thank you and see you!
<Essay>
Um... I haven\'t ever put on my weight becasue of stress.
>> I have never put on weight because of stress.
But it\'s sure that there are some people getting weight when they\'re stressed.
>> But I\'m sure that there are some people who gain weight when they\'re stressed.
I think that this is because many people eat so much to relieve their stress.
>> Correct!
Are you this type of person, too?
>> Are you this type of person too?
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