homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening TOM!
T.G.I.F!~~!!! Yahoo! It\'s our beloved day.
Thank you for your sentences.
I like you composed those today.
However, I was looking for the word \"impart\" but I think you forgot to use it in a sentence.
No worries, it is okay. Please always update your notebook for your vocabulary.
I\'d like to hear these words in class. I know you can do it.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
His crime motive was like this.the victim provoked a quarrel and he was angrily and killed with the deadly weapon.
>> The motive of the crime was to provoke a quarrel and he angrily killed the person with a deadly weapon.
The unknown person gave the box with botton to her.
>> Did you mean: The unknown person gave her a box with button.
I have interest of airplane crash.
>> I am interested in airplane crash.
I\'ll give you a voucher so you must use it worthily.
>> correct
>> OR: I\'ll give you a voucher so you must use it wisely.
Please give me the coupon and I will give you 10000000won.
>> correct
>> OR: Please give me the coupon and I will give you 10,000,000 won.
>> OR: Please give me the coupon and I will give you ten million won.
These days,the consecutive murder incidents have arisen.
>> Did you mean: These days, consecutive murder incidents have arisen.
>> OR: These days, consecutive murder incidents increased.
The bag with one person\'s arm and legs was discovered.
>> A bag with a person\'s arms and legs was discovered.
The crime method is almost same of the notorious serial killer Kang ho sun.
>> The method was almost the same with what the notorious killer Kang Ho Sun did.
>> OR: The motive of the crime was almost the same with the serial killer Kang Ho sun.
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