homework

2014-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

His crime motive was like this.the victim provoked a quarrel and he was angrily and killed with the deadly weapon. The unknown person gave the box with botton to her. I have interest of airplane crash. I'll give you a voucher so you must use it worthily. Please give me the coupon and I will give you 10000000won. These days,the consecutive murder incidents have arisen. The bag with one person's arm and legs was discovered. The crime method is almost same of the notorious serial killer Kang ho sun.

강사 첨삭

Good evening TOM!

T.G.I.F!~~!!! Yahoo! It\'s our beloved day.
Thank you for your sentences.
I like you composed those today.

However, I was looking for the word \"impart\" but I think you forgot to use it in a sentence.

No worries, it is okay. Please always update your notebook for your vocabulary.

I\'d like to hear these words in class. I know you can do it.

Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina


His crime motive was like this.the victim provoked a quarrel and he was angrily and killed with the deadly weapon.

>> The motive of the crime was to provoke a quarrel and he angrily killed the person with a deadly weapon.
The unknown person gave the box with botton to her.

>> Did you mean: The unknown person gave her a box with button.
I have interest of airplane crash.

>> I am interested in airplane crash.
I\'ll give you a voucher so you must use it worthily.

>> correct

>> OR: I\'ll give you a voucher so you must use it wisely.
Please give me the coupon and I will give you 10000000won.

>> correct

>> OR: Please give me the coupon and I will give you 10,000,000 won.

>> OR: Please give me the coupon and I will give you ten million won.



These days,the consecutive murder incidents have arisen.

>> Did you mean: These days, consecutive murder incidents have arisen.

>> OR: These days, consecutive murder incidents increased.
The bag with one person\'s arm and legs was discovered.

>> A bag with a person\'s arms and legs was discovered.
The crime method is almost same of the notorious serial killer Kang ho sun.

>> The method was almost the same with what the notorious killer Kang Ho Sun did.

>> OR: The motive of the crime was almost the same with the serial killer Kang Ho sun.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·