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2014-12-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello there! Whew... I'm wearing out! But the truth that the vacation is getting closer makes me cheered. I'm fighting against sleep. He is the most dangerous enemy ever in my life. Let's exorcIse the enemy! See u soon~ <Homeowork> 1. The storm violently rocked the ship. 2. The artist painstakingly worked at his masterpiece. 3. Dad was offered a free gift by the firm. 4. I read paper that the burglar had been caught in. 5. The cricketers began piercing calls at nightfall. 6. He wore a hat made of coconut fiber on his head. 7. Coffee of many parts is very popular in the world. 8. They couldn't explore the cave withough a torch. 9. The shed was damaged during the storm. 10. James sat himself next to the dog to talking.

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[이름]!
You can do that! I\'ll cheer for you! hahha
Well, that is our common enemy. hahaha
Let\'s fight together.
You did a good job in answering your homework [이름]!
See you tomorrow!
Do your best in your test!
~T. Jessie~
Hello there!
>> Correct!
Whew... I\'m wearing out!

>> Correct!
OR>> The test is wearing me out.
But the truth that the vacation is getting closer makes me cheered.
>>
But the truth that vacation is getting closer cheers me up.
 
I\'m fighting against sleep.

>> Correct!
He is the most dangerous enemy ever in my life.

>> Correct!
Let\'s exorcIse the enemy!

>> Let\'s exorcise the enemy!
See u soon~

>> Correct!
<Homeowork>
1. The storm violently rocked the ship.

>> Correct!
OR>> The storm rocked the ship violently.
2. The artist painstakingly worked at his masterpiece.

>> Correct!
3. Dad was offered a free gift by the firm.

>> Correct!
4. I read paper that the burglar had been caught in.

>> Correct!
>> I read in the paper that the burglar had been caught.
5. The cricketers began piercing calls at nightfall.
>> The cricketers began their piercing calls at nightfall.
6. He wore a hat made of coconut fiber on his head.

>> Correct!
7. Coffee of many parts is very popular in the world.
>> Coffee is very popular in many parts of the world.
8. They couldn\'t explore the cave withough a torch.

>> Correct!
>>
They couldn\'t explore the cave without a torch.
9. The shed was damaged during the storm.

>> Correct!
10. James sat himself next to the dog to talking.
>> James sat next to the dog talking to himself.

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