homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi. ^^
I always have to find new words to do my homework. ^^
I have a lot of words to memorise.
Here is my homework.
What is your opinion about this topic, "Military service should be compulsory."?
In my country, military service must be compulsory.
If my country become unification of North and South Korea, military service can choose.
I hope unification of North and South Korea.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Thank you so much for making your homework.
Well, I really hope so too that your country will be united as one to stop
the war. But, it seems impossible because of the attitudes of both leaders.
By the way, study your corrections below, okay.
Take care! ^^
See you! ^^
~~Teacher Kris
In my country, military service must be compulsory.
>> CorrectIf my country become unification of North and South Korea, military service can choose.
>> If North and South will be united as one country, then the military can choose form the people to be soldiers.I hope unification of North and South Korea.
>> I hope for the unification of North and South Korea.
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