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Good afternoon once again Ms. [이름].
Wow, you can go to Japan anytime you want!
It would only take you one and a half hour. It seems like you are also traveling around your country if you do so because of the time.
Anyway, seems like you had a lot of fun the last time you were there.
Hopefully you could go back there again. ^^
Thanks for your time today!
Have a great day ahead and take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If you could choose one place to go this weekend, where would it be?
I would go to Osaka in Japan if I could choose the place to go this weekend.
>> correct!
>> or: I would like to got o Osaka, Japan if I could choose a place to go this weekend.
I went there last summer.
>> correct!
I had 4nights 5days but it was enough time to see the things there.
>> I had 2 nights and 5 days but the time was not enough to see everything there.
There are many special things that I can\'t see in Korea.
>> There are many special things which I can\'t see in Korea.
>> or: There are a lot of special things which I cannot see in Korea.
Indeed There are delicious food there..^^
>> correct!
>> or; Indeed, there are a lot of delicious foods there.
Also It is not so far from here.
>> It is not also far from here.
It taks time only one hour and half.
>> It would only take one and a half hour.
>> or: It only takes one and a half hour.
I can go there on the weekend.
>> correct!
>> or; I can go there during the weekend.
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