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2014-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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If you could choose one place to go this weekend, where would it be? I would go to Osaka in Japan if I could choose the place to go this weekend. I went there last summer. I had 4nights 5days but it was enough time to see the things there. There are many special things that I can't see in Korea. Indeed There are delicious food there..^^ Also It is not so far from here. It taks time only one hour and half. I can go there on the weekend.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon once again Ms. [이름].

Wow, you can go to Japan anytime you want!

It would only take you one and a half hour. It seems like you are also traveling around your country if you do so because of the time.
Anyway, seems like you had a lot of fun the last time you were there.

Hopefully you could go back there again. ^^

Thanks for your time today!

Have a great day ahead and take care!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


If you could choose one place to go this weekend, where would it be?

I would go to Osaka in Japan if I could choose the place to go this weekend.

>> correct! 

>> or: I would like to got o Osaka, Japan if I could choose a place to go this weekend.
 I went there last summer.

>> correct! 

I had 4nights 5days but it was enough time to see the things there.

>>  I had 2 nights and 5 days but the time was not enough to see everything there.

There are many special things that I can\'t see in Korea.

>> There are many special things which I can\'t see in Korea.

>> or: There are a lot of special things which I cannot see in Korea.
 Indeed There are delicious food there..^^

>> correct! 

>> or; Indeed, there are a lot of delicious foods there.
 Also It is not so far from here.

>> It is not also far from here.

It taks time only one hour and half.

>> It would only take one and a half hour. 

>> or: It only takes one and a half hour. 
 I can go there on the weekend.

>> correct! 

>> or; I can go there during the weekend.

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