HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think adults should still play games? Why or why not?
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I want to stand on the side that adult can play a game.
I think playing games can help someone to get rid of stress and relax brain.
But there is one thing to be cautious that playing a game sometimes can stress out when encountering hard stage.
Hence, the game is a two-edged sword in this regards.
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I agree with your homework, kkk ~~
Sometimes, you feel upset when you cannot move your level up due to a hard stage.
Fantastic!!
Always thankful,
T. Myra
Do you think adults should still play games? Why or why not?
I want to stand on the side that adult can play a game.
>>I want to stand on the side that adults can still play a game.
I think playing games can help someone to get rid of stress and relax brain.
>>I think playing games can help someone to get rid of his or her stress and to relax the brain.
But there is one thing to be cautious that playing a game sometimes can stress out when encountering hard stage.
>>But there is one thing to be cautious about, playing a game sometimes can make one stressful when encountering a hard stage.
Hence, the game is a two-edged sword in this regards.
>>Hence, a game is a two-edged sword in this regard.
Another day to have class with you, and I\'m so delighted. :)
Having a very kind and humble student like you makes my day.
Hope you feel the same way.
Most importantly, I hope that this homework as well as my comments daily help you with your English skill. :)
I agree with your homework, kkk ~~
Sometimes, you feel upset when you cannot move your level up due to a hard stage.
Fantastic!!
Always thankful,
T. Myra
Do you think adults should still play games? Why or why not?
I want to stand on the side that adult can play a game.
>>I want to stand on the side that adults can still play a game.
I think playing games can help someone to get rid of stress and relax brain.
>>I think playing games can help someone to get rid of his or her stress and to relax the brain.
But there is one thing to be cautious that playing a game sometimes can stress out when encountering hard stage.
>>But there is one thing to be cautious about, playing a game sometimes can make one stressful when encountering a hard stage.
Hence, the game is a two-edged sword in this regards.
>>Hence, a game is a two-edged sword in this regard.
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