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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! Erine ^^
I am happy to talking with you again.
My phone is realive.
I lost two opportunities to delay my class.
I sometimes have to get your calling when I am working at my hospital.
I think that high school education is enough. There are nothing problems to live in the real society. It is option for individual to get more eudcation.
If someone want to study more, someone have to go university.
But i know that it has tendency to overemphasize education in Korea.
In my case, I graduated two different university. I study more than others.
But I spent much money and time.
The problems is not a standard. Without education, we can't take recognition from society. And It is also difficult to get a job. That make us study more and more.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]! Happy Wednesday!
I was really happy when I heard your voice again.
I hope that your phone will not be broken anymore so wherever you are, you can
still talk to me and have a class.
Always remember that you can ask questions all the time.
It\'s my pleasure to answer your inquiries about our classes.
See you!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi! Erine ^^>> Hi, Erine!
I am happy to talking with you again.
I am happy to talking with you again.
>> I am happy to talk with you again. or I am happy to have talked with you again.
My phone is realive.
My phone is realive.
>> My phone is alive again!
I lost two opportunities to delay my class.
I lost two opportunities to delay my class.
>> I lost two opportunities in delaying my class.
I sometimes have to get your calling when I am working at my hospital.
I sometimes have to get your calling when I am working at my hospital.
>> I sometimes have to get your call when I am working in the hospital.
I think that high school education is enough.
I think that high school education is enough.
>> Correct.
There are nothing problems to live in the real society.
>> There are no problems in living in the real society.
It is option for individual to get more eudcation.
>> It is an option of an individual to get more education.
If someone want to study more, someone have to go university.
If someone want to study more, someone have to go university.
>> If someone wants to study more, he or she has to go to university.
But i know that it has tendency to overemphasize education in Korea.
But i know that it has tendency to overemphasize education in Korea.
>> However, I know that it has a tendency to overemphasize the education system in Korea.
In my case, I graduated two different university.
In my case, I graduated two different university.
>> In my case, I graduated from two different universities.
I study more than others.
>> I studied more/longer than the others.
But I spent much money and time.
But I spent much money and time.
>> I spend much money and time, too.
The problems is not a standard.
The problems is not a standard.
>> The problem is not a standard.
Without education, we can\'t take recognition from society.
>> Without education, we can\'t receive recognition from the society.
And It is also difficult to get a job.
>> It is also difficult for somebody to get a job.
That make us study more and more.
>> Those reasons make us study more and more.
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