homework

Good morning Ms. [이름]!

Did you have a good s[이름]p? How are you feeling this morning?

Hope you are feeling good at this time.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts about our topic. I guess you were remembering some memories in the past which made you smile while writing your composition. Isn\'t it? kkkk

Anyway, whatever it is, I agree that it made who you are now since you learned from it.

I\'ll talk to you later!

Have a nice day ahead and take care.

Always,
Kathrine ^^

If you could edit your memories, which ones would you erase and why? Which ones would you make clearer and more vivid?

This is an amazing abillity that I could edit my memories.

>> correct! 

>> or: Editing my memories could be an amazing ability.
 Ofcouse, if I could erase some parts, it would be the mpments that I was eashamed or embbarassed.

>> of course, I could erase some parts where I was ashamed of or embarrassed.

I guess I don\'t need to explian why.^^;

>>  correct! (explain)

and if I would make the moments that I want to make more vivid, that would be the moments which I was happy ans good. hehe

>> And if I could make the moments which is more vivid, those would be the happy ones. hehe.

However, I don\'t really want to edit my memories even though I could do it.

>> correct!
 Because that is the ture and because of those moments makes present me.

>> Because those moments are real and it made me who I am now.
 Sometimes I can have embbarassing moments or happy moments.

>>  correct! (embarrassing)

 I think this is the life. hehe

>> I think this is life.

I feel so good while I am writing the essay.

>> correct!

 It makes me smile!!!

>> correct!

If I can really edit my memories, I want to change all the things into the tings that I like!!!

>> correct!