Homework^^
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강사 첨삭
Hello Jenny,
I know you can really be successful in speaking the English language. You just have to remember all the things that you\'ve been learning so that you can apply it, if you are having a conversation with some one.
Have fun in learning and be confident!!!!
T. Jeny
Hi jeny~
>>correct
Is it possible to have a healthy life style in modern world?
- I think, It is impossible to have a healthy life style.
>>I think, it is impossible to have a healthy life style these days.
because In modern world, people are busy. so they are no time to take care of. me neither.
>>In our modern society now, people are too busy thus they don\'t have time to take care of themselves. I am also experiencing the same thing.
but the world is better then before. maybe, that\'s why we lost the health.
>>The world became a better place to live in than before but unfortunately, we are not concern of out health,
Today was good time. I really want english very well. because I\'m going to Holland for study music.
>>Today was a good time. I really want to speak English well because I will be going to Holland to study music.
but I don\'t know many things. many many many things.... I can speak short phrase.
>>But I don\'t know a lot of things, I can only speak short phrases.
so I need you. I think, you great teacher.
>>So, I need you and I think you are a great teacher.
I will do my best!! see you tommorow~^^
>>I will do my best!! See you tomorrow~^^
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