homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Shanee~
I agree He said
because I don't have a lot of money but I have girlfriend and my Family, and I like to work. I'm happy!
If I have a lof of money. I would be nice but it is not important.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Thanks you very much for sending in your homework.
I appreciate your effort.
Anyway, it is true that money is really important because we can\'t survive this
world without it. However, it is not the sole reason that could make a person happy.
We must value the things/people that make us happy and keep happiness within our reach.
See you!
~Teacher Shanee
I agree He saidbecause I don\'t have a lot of money but I have girlfriend and my Family, and I like to work.
>>>I agree with what he said. It is because I don\'t have a lot of money but I have a girlfriend a family. And I like to work.
I\'m happy!
>>> Correct!If I have a lof of money. I would be nice but it is not important.
>>> If I have a lot of money, it would be better but money is the most important thing.
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