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2014-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Hi Shanee~ I agree He said because I don't have a lot of money but I have girlfriend and my Family, and I like to work. I'm happy! If I have a lof of money. I would be nice but it is not important.

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Hi there [이름]!   Thanks you very much for sending in your homework. I appreciate your effort. Anyway, it is true that money is really important because we can\'t survive this world without it. However, it is not the sole reason that could make a person happy. We must value the things/people that make us happy and keep happiness within our reach.   See you!   ~Teacher Shanee   I agree He saidbecause I don\'t have a lot of money but I have girlfriend and my Family, and I like to work. >>>I agree with what he said. It is because I don\'t have a lot of money but I have a girlfriend a family. And I like to work. I\'m happy! >>> Correct!If I have a lof of money. I would be nice but it is not important. >>> If I have a lot of money, it would be better but money is the most important thing.

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