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학생이 쓴 원문
Good day Jessie!
Thank you for that you always think like that. Your word makes me confident enough to learn new things in a language especially English. Now I believe that I'm eager to learn it and I hope to continue my heart for a new language to be burning. Anyway, I enjoy learning a new one now. :D
Take care!
<Essay>
The appropriate stress is alawys helpful to do something. It help to focus on and inspire to do what you've planned. So it's really necessary whatever you do. But it must be poisonous to bear too much stress.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Great to hear that.
I am glad that my comments motivate you to be better and to learn more.
Anyway, I totally agree that somewhat stress is also necessary for us to do something.
But it shouldn\'t be too much.
Let\'s be happy and stress free today [이름]!
See you!
~T. Jessie~
Good day Jessie!
>> Correct!
Thank you for that you always think like that.
>> Thank you for always thinking that way.
Your word makes me confident enough to learn new things in a language especially English.
>> Correct!
Now I believe that I\'m eager to learn it and I hope to continue my heart for a new language to be burning.
>> Now I believe that I\'m eager to learn it and I hope to continue my love for a new language to be burning.
Anyway, I enjoy learning a new one now. :D
>> Correct!
Take care!
>> Correct!
<Essay>
The appropriate stress is alawys helpful to do something.
>> The appropriate stress is always helpful in doing something.
It help to focus on and inspire to do what you\'ve planned.
>> It helps someone to focus and it inspires you to do what you\'ve planned.
So it\'s really necessary whatever you do.
>> Do you mean: So it\'s really necessary for whatever you do.
But it must be poisonous to bear too much stress.
>> Correct!
OR>> But it must be toxic to bear too much stress.
Great to hear that.
I am glad that my comments motivate you to be better and to learn more.
Anyway, I totally agree that somewhat stress is also necessary for us to do something.
But it shouldn\'t be too much.
Let\'s be happy and stress free today [이름]!
See you!
~T. Jessie~
Good day Jessie!
>> Correct!
Thank you for that you always think like that.
>> Thank you for always thinking that way.
Your word makes me confident enough to learn new things in a language especially English.
>> Correct!
Now I believe that I\'m eager to learn it and I hope to continue my heart for a new language to be burning.
>> Now I believe that I\'m eager to learn it and I hope to continue my love for a new language to be burning.
Anyway, I enjoy learning a new one now. :D
>> Correct!
Take care!
>> Correct!
<Essay>
The appropriate stress is alawys helpful to do something.
>> The appropriate stress is always helpful in doing something.
It help to focus on and inspire to do what you\'ve planned.
>> It helps someone to focus and it inspires you to do what you\'ve planned.
So it\'s really necessary whatever you do.
>> Do you mean: So it\'s really necessary for whatever you do.
But it must be poisonous to bear too much stress.
>> Correct!
OR>> But it must be toxic to bear too much stress.
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