homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think people can control their own destiny?
Maybe, people can control their life.
I am a christian.
I believe that life was changed when we try to love jesus.
But I don't know whether we can control our life.
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Be healthy!
T.Faye
Do you think people can control their own destiny?>> CORRECT:Maybe, people can control their life.
>> CORRECT:I am a christian.
>> CORRECT:I believe that life was changed when we try to love jesus.
>> CORRECT:But I don\'t know whether we can control or can\'t control our lives
>> CORRECT:
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