homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good job with your sentences, TOM^^
We can\'t really stop natural disasters.
We just have to be prepared for it.
I hope that there will be an invention that will predict what disaster will happen during the year,
We experience at least twenty typhoons every year here in the Philippines.
Thanks for a fantastic essay, keep it up!
Teacher Nina
We can stop the natural disaster.
>> We can\'t stop natural disasters.
So we must notice the time and where.
>> So we must be notified every time.
>> OR: We should informed every now and then.
Anyway,we can help the people who lost their house and family.
>> correct
We can go to the shelter to help the poor people.
>> correct
We can build a new house and buildings that save from natural disaster like Truss structure.
>> Did you mean: We can build a new house and buildings that is safe from natural disaster like Truss structure.
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