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2014-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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I think stress is not good. Because it caused by illness or other negative effect in our body. So it is important to enjoy something without stress. Even though We can not avoid it, but we have to effort to reduce it. I also effort to work without stress. Just enjoy, after that we can reach our goal. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!
My ever positive and honest student, thanks for sharing your perception about stress.
However, I do believe that sometimes, stress is also needed to make us do or realize something.
Well, let\'s enjoy this stress free day. See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
I think stress is not good.
>> Correct!
Because it caused by illness or other negative effect in our body.
>> Because it causes illness or other negative effects in our body.
So it is important to enjoy something without stress.
>> Correct!
Even though We can not avoid it, but we have to effort to reduce it.
>> Even though we can not avoid it, we have to exert effort to reduce it.
I also effort to work without stress.
>> I also exerted effort to work without stress.
Just enjoy, after that we can reach our goal.
>> I just enjoy, after that we can reach our goal.
Thank you.
>> Correct!

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