Homework (53: Do you consider artificial beauty (cosmetic surgery) to still be beautiful? Why/why no

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I don’t care about artificial beauty because it is also types of beauty that they wanted.

>>I don’t care about artificial beauty because it\'s the type of beauty that they wanted.
In addition, if I were rich, I may try getting it and height too.; it\'s a kind of my lack to be changed.

>>In addition, if I were rich I may try to get it too like for my height. It is a kind of lack if you can change something in your appearance.
Unfortunately, I make money which is suitable only for living, so, I just envy them who get plastic surgery for their beauty because it means they have enough financial condition.

>>Unfortunately, I only make enough money for myself so I just envy people who can get plastic surgery because it means they make more than they need.

>>Unfortunately, I only make enough money for myself so I just envy people who can get plastic surgery because it means they are financially stable.

Some people bully when they see a person who called Gang-Nam Mi-In.; you might see them easily while you are walking on the street in Gang-Nam because each of their faces have similarity.

>>Some people bully when they see a person in Gang-Nam Mi-In. You will see them easily while you are walking on the street in Gang-Nam because

they look the same.

But I think they stop bullying them since it’s their choice and their effort to become a perfect.

>>I think they need to stop bullying them since it’s their own choice and they use their own effort to become perfect.
Furthermore, they have never supporting anything to get plastic surgery.

>>Furthermore, they have never supported them to get the plastic surgery.
Moreover, some cosmetic surgery are very dangerous and it can intimidate their life too.

>>Moreover, some cosmetic surgeries are very dangerous and it can intimidate their life too.
Although they knew that, they try to get surgery to eliminate their weakness and to have confidence from that.
>>Although they knew that, they still try to get the surgery to eliminate their weaknesses and have confidence. 
Hence, people should stop making noisy for them.

>>Hence, people should stop making fun about them.