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2014-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Hi Erine^^ It's getting cold in Korea. It is coming Christmas. You're homework is difficult to think ^^ ;; "Ignorance is bliss" I don't agree that. Because that expression doesn't consist of the quality of life. If you know the something you need more anything. Unless you know something even if you don' realize the need. I think the real bliss is self decision. It is different that getting bliss with ignorance and getting a choice with notice.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]! Was it difficult to answer the question? kkk I think, it was because I had little confusions with your sentences. I hope we can continue discussing this tomorrow so that you can elaborate more of your answers. See you!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Hi Erine^^ >>Correct.It\'s getting cold in Korea. >> Correct.It is coming Christmas. >>Christmas is coming!You\'re homework is difficult to think ^^ ;; >>Your homework is difficult to answer.\"Ignorance is bliss\"I don\'t agree that. >> I don\'t agree with that.Because that expression doesn\'t consist of the quality of life. >>Correct. (But what does it mean when you used the word \"consist\"?If you know the something you need more anything. >> If you know something you need more that anything (Where is the continuation of this sentence, [이름]?)Unless you know something even if you don\' realize the need. >> Unless you know something even if you don\'t realize the need of it.I think the real bliss is self decision. >>Correct.It is different that getting bliss with ignorance and getting a choice with notice. >> It is different when we get a bliss with ignorance and get a choice with notice.

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