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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there TOM!
Yipee! One more day to go before the weekend. ^^
You can take a rest again. ^^ How is your week going?
I hope that you are having a marvelous one.
Thank you so much for your time and for making me happy everyday.
I encourage you to write the new words you learn in a notebook.
I hope to see it in our class.
You should bring it wherever you go. Read it during your free time.
You can do it. Talk to you very soon.
I am scared of bombs. Thank for sharing about H and atom Bomb.
I appreciate it a lot.
Teacher Nina
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>> Fahrenheit is the used in giving temperature.
I watched a movie titled 12345 degrees celsius.
>> correct (spelling check: Celsius ^^)
The elemant of fugu\'s poison is tetrodotoxin.
>> The element of a Fugu\'s poison us Tetrodotoxin.
The H-bomb is the strongest bomb Atom bomb is not.
>> The H-bomb is the strongest bomb.
>> OR: Atom is not as strong as the H-bomb.
I\'m not good at physics.
>> correct ( capitalization: Physics ^^
The power o H-bomb is huge.
>> Did you mean: The power of H-bomb is huge.
>> The distraction level of H-bomb is huge.
The seismic wave turned around the Earth three~four times.
>> The seismic wave turned around the Earth about three to four times.
Long ago some people drop the H-bomb called Tsar bomba and 60KM tall mushroom cloud apear.
>> Long time ago, some people dropped the H-bomb called Tsar bomb and 60km tall mushroom cloud appeared.
It is more strong than a atom bomb called little boy 3800 times.
>> It is stronger than an atom bomb called Little boy by three thousand eight hundred times.
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