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Since a supervisor has a position that can change one's organization's future totally, many qualities should be satisfied. Among the requirements, I believe professionalism and affection for the workers are most important. To begin with, a good boss should be specialized in the field the organization is in. The organization face many small and huge difficulties as they grow. Each time, the boss should handle the problems wisely using his knowledge and experience so that the organization do not shake. On top of that, a boss should love one's employees. As a family in the workplace, the supervisor and the workers shouldd love and believe each other so that the working conditions improve, as a result, the productivity rises. To make an organization successful, not only the employees but the boss should work diligently. The workers will be motivated to work harder if the supervisor is skillful and truly trust them. A good boss is someone who can be an example of his or her workers.

Thank you very much Yeojeong for another well done homework I really enjoy reading all about your essays and learning about your opinion towards our topic. Great job! Continue writing because I really think you have a talent in this area. Here are the corrections I made for you Since a supervisor has a position that can change one\'s organization\'s future totally, many qualities should be satisfied. >>Since being a supervisor is a position that can change the future of the organization one is working with totally, many qualities should be met. Among the requirements, I believe professionalism and affection for the workers are most important. >>Among the requirements, I believe that professionalism and affection for the workers are the most important.To begin with, a good boss should be specialized in the field the organization is in. >>To begin with, a good boss should be an expert in the field the organization is in. The organization face many small and huge difficulties as they grow. >>The organization face may face several difficulties, may it be big or small, as they grow. Each time, the boss should handle the problems wisely using his knowledge and experience so that the organization do not shake. >>Each time this happens, the boss should handle the problems wisely using his knowledge and experience so that the organization will stay resilient.On top of that, a boss should love one\'s employees. >>On top of that, a boss should love his employees. As a family in the workplace, the supervisor and the workers should love and believe each other so that the working conditions improve, as a result, the productivity rises. >>As a family in the workplace, the supervisor and the workers should interact harmoniously with each other so that the working conditions improve, for productivity to increase.To make an organization successful, not only the employees but the boss should work diligently. >>Correct! The workers will be motivated to work harder if the supervisor is skillful and truly trust them. >>The workers will be motivated to work harder if the supervisor is skillful and if he truly trusts them.  A good boss is someone who can be an example of his or her workers. >>Correct!