homework
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Hello Heather
I know you can really be successful in speaking the English language. You just have to remember all the things that you\'ve been learning so that you can apply it, if you are having a conversation with some one.
Have fun in learning and be confident!!!!
T. Jeny
What is the difference between love and being in love?
Both of two things, are very meaningful in our life.
>>Both are meaningful in our lives.
Love itself is a beautiful.
>>Love itself is beautiful.
But, most of people are have the tendency to think that Being in love is more special than Being in original love.
(I don\'t think this sentence is correct.)
>>But most people have a tendency to think, that being in love is more special than love.
In fact, \"being in love\" is more excited. but \"original love\" is not only a comfortable but also a soft. More than we thought.
>>As a matter of fact, being in love is more exciting. Love is feeling comfortable more than we thought.
We can feel the original love from family, oldest lovers, friends when you were young and very commonly relationship.
>>When we were young, we learned about love from our family and friends.
I Confess. I was indifferent to my family, and friends, and oldest love.
>>I confess that I was indifferent to my family and friends.
So I\'ll trying to express to mind that thank to them.
>>So now, I am trying my best to show how grateful I am to them.
I won\'t be happy, if I don\'t express to them. Because w[이름] you\'ll be happy or will be sorrowful, they are always with me.
>>I think, it won\'t make me happy, if I won\'t express my love to them because I know that they are always there for me even in hard times.
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