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2014-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

Is there such a thing as good and bad luck? If so, what is it? Yes, there is such a thing as good ans bad luck. Let me tell you three things as good or bad luck each. First, It is a four-leaf clover. It is not easy to find them. That is why people say it symbilizes good luck. Second, The bird migpie! We believe that we will have good news when magpies sing in Korea. Lastly, Number 7 I guess I don't need to explain at all. Let's see some things as bad luck. Firstly, broken mirror. If the mirror is broken, bad thing will happen. Secondly, number 4. It has same sound with dead when we read in chinesses Lastly, the bird crow! But it has a good meaning in Japan. There are lots of superstitions in each country however we don't need to believe in this. It always depends on one's mind.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!

It is nice to hear form your again this week.

Because of what you have mentioned, I suddenly remembered one of my professors when  I was in college.

He told us  we all make good luck or bad luck and it does not depend on superstitions or any other things.

It is us who  makes it. When we do things perfectly, then it is good luck or vice versa.
Anyway, thanks for sharing the superstitions you have there in your country.

And thanks also for your time today.

See you tomorrow. Take care for now!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


Is there such a thing as good and bad luck? If so, what is it?

Yes, there is such a thing as good ans bad luck.

>>  correct! (and)
 Let me tell you three things as good or bad luck each.

>>   Let me tell you three things each as a good or bad luck.
 First, It is a four-leaf clover.

>>  correct!

It is not easy to find them.

>>  correct!

That is why people  say it symbilizes good luck.

>>  correct!
 Second, The bird migpie!

>>  correct!

We believe that we will have good news when magpies sing in Korea.

>>  correct!

>> or; In Korea, we believe that there is a good news when magpies sing.

 Lastly, Number 7 I guess I don\'t need to explain at all.
>>  
 Lastly, Number 7.  I guess I don\'t need to explain it at all.
Let\'s see some things as bad luck.

>>  correct!

>> Let us see some things which as bad luck.
 Firstly, broken mirror.

>>  correct!

If the mirror is broken, bad thing will happen.

>>  correct!
 Secondly, number 4.

>>  correct!

It has same sound with dead when we read in chinesses

>>  I has the same sound with dead when we read it in Chinese.
 Lastly, the bird crow! But it has a good meaning in Japan.
>>  correct!
There are lots of superstitions in each country however we don\'t need to believe in this.

>>  correct!

It always depends on one\'s mind.

>>  correct!



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