homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
People should do things that they do not enjoy doing?
The children should study their education but most children don't like to study.
An adult should do to work in the office but most adults don't like it, they only want to have rest.
So, I think all of people should do things that they do not enjoy doing from when they were born. They want it or don't want it, they should do it.
In my opinion, if we can't avoid it, I hope that we enjoy it.
강사 첨삭
Hi Suinny! ^^
Merry Christmas! ^^
Thank you for making your homework. Ever since, education is the most important
because we need it for our future. We need jobs to have good lives so we have to make
the most of it. It is also compulsary that we must do and enjoy our job eventhough
we don\'t like it because we need it. So, enjoy your job and have a Merry Christmas! ^^
See you! ^^
~~Teacher Kris
The children should study their education but most children don\'t like to study.
>> Children should study for their education but most most children don\'t like studying.An adult should do to work in the office but most adults don\'t like it, they only want to have rest.
>> Adults should work in the office but most of them don\'t like; they only want rest.So, I think all of people should do things that they do not enjoy doing from when they were born.
>> So, I think all of people should do things that they do not enjoy doing.
They want it or don\'t want it, they should do it.
>> Either they want to do it or they don\'t want to do it, they should it.In my opinion, if we can\'t avoid it, I hope that we enjoy it.
>> In my opinion, if we do things that do not enjoy then probably, we can enjoy it soon.
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