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2014-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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I disagree that the statement 'The Boys and girls should attend separate schools.' Becausea girls´ (middle,high) school or boy's (middle,high) school are in existence.

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Hi there [이름]! Thank you for answering the homework but I would have appreciated it more if you gave more details. Your answer is quite vague that makes me ask; 1. Are all schools in Korea (middle school and high school) single-gender schools? 2. Is it only in university where boys and girls can attend the same school? 3. Why do you disagree with the idea of single-gender schools? This is why adding details and examples in essays are encouraged. ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   P.S. Just a reminder, we won\'t be having classes on the 25th. okay? ^^   I disagree that the statement \'The Boys and girls should attend separate schools.\' Becausea girls´ (middle,high) school or boy\'s (middle,high) school are in existence. >> I disagree with the statement that boys and girls should attend separate schools because exclusive girls\' and boys\' schools in the middle and high school levels already exist.

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