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Our family has a tradition on Christmas day which has been kept since I was young. We always buy a big cake and cut it at Christmas night. Since then, we eat it on every morning til the cake is gone. The cake usually tastes [이름]colate or mocha because I and my father like them. There are only my parents and I in my family member, we can eat the cake for a few days. We preserve the cake in the fridge and eat one or two pieces of it as soon as we wake up. Every year, we should decide whether to buy an ordinary cake or to buy an ice-cream cake before the Christmas comes. However, since most Christmas themed ice-cream cakes have various tastes that are fixed in one cake, there are always one or two tastes that my family doesn't like. Hence, we rather buy an ordinary cake or just a hug cup of ice-cream that we can [이름]ose and put several tastes in it. For this Christmas we have not decided yet, but I will recomment an ice-cream cake since I want to eat [이름]colate and cheese tastes ice-cream.

Yey for another amazing essay! Thank you for continuing to make me smile just by reading your homeworks. Also continue and work on your writing skills because I think it would be a waste if that potential will not be molded. You definitely have the skills. We just have to polish. Here are the corrections I made for you. Our family has a tradition on Christmas day which has been kept since I was young. >>Our family has a tradition on Christmas day which has been observed since I was young. We always buy a big cake and cut it at Christmas night. >>We always buy a big cake and share it at Christmas night. Since then, we eat it on every morning til the cake is gone. >>We eat until morning til the cake is gone. The cake usually tastes [이름]colate or mocha because I and my father like them. >>The flavor of the cake is usually [이름]colate or mocha because me and my father like these flavors.  There are only my parents and I in my family member, we can eat the cake for a few days. >>Family consists of my parents and I so the cake lasts for a few days. We preserve the cake in the fridge and eat one or two pieces of it as soon as we wake up. >>We put the cake in the fridge and eat one or two slices of it as soon as we wake up. Every year, we should decide whether to buy an ordinary cake or to buy an ice-cream cake before the Christmas comes. >>Every year, we decide on whether to buy an ordinary cake or to buy an ice-cream cake before Christmas comes. However, since most Christmas themed ice-cream cakes have various tastes that are fixed in one cake, there are always one or two tastes that my family doesn\'t like. >>However, since most Christmas themed ice-cream cakes have various tastes that are fixed in one cake, there are always one or two flavors that my family doesn\'t like. Hence, we rather buy an ordinary cake or just a hug cup of ice-cream that we can [이름]ose and put several tastes in it. >>Hence, we rather buy an ordinary cake or just a hug pint of ice-cream that we can [이름]ose and put several flavors in it. For this Christmas we have not decided yet, but I will recomment an ice-cream cake since I want to eat [이름]colate and cheese tastes ice-cream. >>This Christmas we have not decided yet, but I will recomment an ice-cream cake since I want to eat [이름]colate and cheese flavored ice-cream.