HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
What's your greatest wish for yourself this Christmas?
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I don’t have special wish for myself, instead I wish my family are always healthy and happy like now.
But in the event that I can see Santa Claus, I will tell him that I want to have a new car for Christmas gift. :-)
Merry Christmas, my teacher!
강사 첨삭
Deck the halls with boughs of holly
Fa-la-la-la-la, la-la-la-la
\'Tis the season to be jolly
Fa-la-la-la-la, la-la-la-la
메리 크리스마스 my student! :3
In our language, we say Maligayang Pasko! :D
One more day before Christmas eve!
Like what the song says, let\'s be happy!
I also wish you and your family good health and happiness, Mr. [이름]! :))
And the car of course. kkk. What brand do you want? kk ~
__Teacher Myra__
What\'s your greatest wish for yourself this Christmas?
I don’t have special wish for myself, instead I wish my family are always healthy and happy like now.
>>I don’t have special wish for myself, instead, I wish my family is always healthy and happy like now. (my family members are)
But in the event that I can see Santa Claus, I will tell him that I want to have a new car for Christmas gift. :-)
>>But in the event that I can see Santa Claus, I will tell him that I want to have a new car as a Christmas gift. :-)
OR: >>But in the event that I can see Santa Claus, I will tell him that I want to have a new car for Christmas. :-)
Merry Christmas, my teacher!
>>CORRECT
OR: Happy Holidays!
Fa-la-la-la-la, la-la-la-la
\'Tis the season to be jolly
Fa-la-la-la-la, la-la-la-la
메리 크리스마스 my student! :3
In our language, we say Maligayang Pasko! :D
One more day before Christmas eve!
Like what the song says, let\'s be happy!
I also wish you and your family good health and happiness, Mr. [이름]! :))
And the car of course. kkk. What brand do you want? kk ~
__Teacher Myra__
What\'s your greatest wish for yourself this Christmas?
I don’t have special wish for myself, instead I wish my family are always healthy and happy like now.
>>I don’t have special wish for myself, instead, I wish my family is always healthy and happy like now. (my family members are)
But in the event that I can see Santa Claus, I will tell him that I want to have a new car for Christmas gift. :-)
>>But in the event that I can see Santa Claus, I will tell him that I want to have a new car as a Christmas gift. :-)
OR: >>But in the event that I can see Santa Claus, I will tell him that I want to have a new car for Christmas. :-)
Merry Christmas, my teacher!
>>CORRECT
OR: Happy Holidays!
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