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Each person has different perspectives and aspects to consider when making a friend since we always have relationships with other people. In my case, I want to hang out with a friend who is reliable. To start with, I can reveal me to the reliable friend. Everyone has flaws which they are concealing to others. However, to the reliable friend, I don't have to hide my weaknesses or pretend to be another person since he will still remain next to me whoever I am. However, the most important reason is that I can make a true relationship that me and my trustworthy friend always stay in each other's side. I feeㅣ very grateful to someone whom I can trust and put more efforts on him, I also try to become a reliable friend to him. Hence we both try hard to continue the relationship as long as possible. An intelligent or humorous friend may be a help when I get along with him, however that doesn't mean that we can be true friends. Trust is the most significant factor when being a true friend.

Merry Christmas Yeojeong! Thank you very much for doing your homework and for letting me read another well done composition. Continue studying and writing! Here are the corrections I made for you Each person has different perspectives and aspects to consider when making a friend since we always have relationships with other people. >>Each person has a different perspective when making a friend since we always have relationships with other people. In my case, I want to hang out with a friend who is reliable. >>Correct!To start with, I can reveal me to the reliable friend. >>To start everything, I can be my true self to a reliable friend. Everyone has flaws which they are concealing to others. >>Everyone has flaws which they are conceal to others. However, to the reliable friend, I don\'t have to hide my weaknesses or pretend to be another person since he will still remain next to me whoever I am. >>However to a reliable friend, I don\'t have to hide my weaknesses or pretend to be another person since he will still remain next to me whoever I may be. However, the most important reason is that I can make a true relationship that me and my trustworthy friend always stay in each other\'s side. >>But, the most important reason is that I can enjoy a true relationship and I can be assured that me and my trustworthy friend will always stay in each other\'s side. I feeㅣ very grateful to someone whom I can trust and put more efforts on him, I also try to become a reliable friend to him. >>I feel very grateful to someone who I can trust and I tend to put more efforts for him because I also try to become a reliable friend to him. Hence we both try hard to continue the relationship as long as possible. >>Hence we both try hard to keep the relationship as long as possible.An intelligent or humorous friend may be a help when I get along with him, however that doesn\'t mean that we can be true friends. >>Correct! Trust is the most significant factor when being a true friend. >>Trust is the most significant factor to become a true friend.