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2014-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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How are you going to celebrate Christmas? Is it different now from what you did last year? I usually had christmas in church. I prepared a roll play with kids. We performed it on christmas eve to celebrate Jesus' birthday. The following day, I had a service at 11 a.m. After this, I could meet my friends or had own time. But this christmas was alittle bit different from usually christmas. I am not a teacher anymore so I could have my own time. I met my friends and had a small party. The following day, I had to atttend the service because of my nephew's boptism. We took some pictures for remebering. After taht we went shopping for buying some christmas's presents. It was not reaaly special but I like being with precious people.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ms. [이름]!

How was your holiday? I hope you enjoyed your time and you had fun.

And it is good to know that you did a different thing than doing the usual way of celebrating Christmas.

Anyway, I will talk to you again tomorrow and we will talk more about it.
See you then!
have a great day ahead!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


How are you going to celebrate Christmas?
Is it different now from what you did last year?


 I usually had christmas in church.

>> I usually celebrate Christmas at the church.

I prepared a roll play with kids.

>>  I prepare a role paly with the kids.
 We performed it on christmas eve to celebrate Jesus\' birthday.

>>  correct!
 The following day, I had a service at 11 a.m.

>>  correct!

After this, I could meet my friends or had own time. 

>>  After this, I could meet my friends or have my own time.
 But this christmas was alittle bit different from usually christmas.

>>  But this Christmas is a little bit different from the usual.
 I am not a teacher anymore so I could have my own time.

>>  correct!

I met my friends and had a small party.

>>  correct!

The following day, I had to atttend the service because of my nephew\'s boptism.

>>  correct! (baptism)

We took some pictures for remebering.

>>  We took some pictures as a remembrance.

After taht we went shopping for buying some christmas\'s presents.

>>  After that, we went shopping to buy some Christmas presents.

It was not reaaly special but I like being with precious people.

>>  correct!

>> or: It was not really special but I like to be with precious people.

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