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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning Ms. [이름]!
How was your holiday? I hope you enjoyed your time and you had fun.
And it is good to know that you did a different thing than doing the usual way of celebrating Christmas.
Anyway, I will talk to you again tomorrow and we will talk more about it.
See you then!
have a great day ahead!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
How are you going to celebrate Christmas?
Is it different now from what you did last year?
I usually had christmas in church.
>> I usually celebrate Christmas at the church.
I prepared a roll play with kids.
>> I prepare a role paly with the kids.
We performed it on christmas eve to celebrate Jesus\' birthday.
>> correct!
The following day, I had a service at 11 a.m.
>> correct!
After this, I could meet my friends or had own time.
>> After this, I could meet my friends or have my own time.
But this christmas was alittle bit different from usually christmas.
>> But this Christmas is a little bit different from the usual.
I am not a teacher anymore so I could have my own time.
>> correct!
I met my friends and had a small party.
>> correct!
The following day, I had to atttend the service because of my nephew\'s boptism.
>> correct! (baptism)
We took some pictures for remebering.
>> We took some pictures as a remembrance.
After taht we went shopping for buying some christmas\'s presents.
>> After that, we went shopping to buy some Christmas presents.
It was not reaaly special but I like being with precious people.
>> correct!
>> or: It was not really special but I like to be with precious people.
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