Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Before I was married, I always spent time with my friends on Christmas.
However, after I was married, I always spent time with my family on Christmas.
I didn't know my mother's loneliness before I was married.
I am sorry about that.
Now, I have my family and I love my family.
After my children grow up, they must want to spend time with their friends on Christmas.
I must feel lonely like my mom.
So, I think that the present is the best present.
I will enjoy the present before my children grow up.
My favorite movie is About Time.
I like the script of below.
"We are all travelling through time together, everyday of our lives. All we can do is do our best to relish this remarkable ride." - About Time, 2013.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
A single life is like the best life ever, according to others because you can spend
your time with your friends. You can have all the pleasures that you want but you won\'t be happy
forever. I think married life is the best because you have the treasures and that treasures are your
children and husband. So, take good care of them like precious jewels.
We feel lonley sometimes but it only takes for awhile. I do sometimes feel the loneliness but
it only takes for awhile.
By the way, I did not yet watch the movie, About Time since I do not have much time to watch it.
I think this movie is pretty good. I will watch it soon.
[이름], all I want to say is enjoy life to the fullest. Watch your kids grow and how will they
become.
Take care and have a great day ahead. ^^
~~Teacher Kris
Before I was married, I always spent time with my friends on Christmas.
>> Before I got married, I always spent time with my friends on Christmas.
However, after I was married, I always spent time with my family on Christmas.
>> However, when I got married, I always spent time with my family on Christmas.I didn\'t know my mother\'s loneliness before I was married.
>> I didn\'t know my mother\'s loneliness when I was still single.I am sorry about that.
>> I felt sorry about it.Now, I have my family and I love my family.
>> Now, I have my family and I love them.After my children grow up, they must want to spend time with their friends on Christmas.
>> My children are growing up and they want to spend their time with their friends on Christmas.I must feel lonely like my mom.
>> I am feeling lonely like my mom.So, I think that the present is the best present.
>> I think that receiving gifts is the best.I will enjoy the present before my children grow up.
>> I will enjoy all the presents while my children grow.My favorite movie is About Time.
>> CorrectI like the script of below.
>> I like the script shown below.\"We are all travelling through time together, everyday of our lives. All we can do is do our best to relish this remarkable ride.\" - About Time, 2013.
>> Correct
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