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2014-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Hi Shanee! I am grateful to your comment! I want you have a happy today and happy weekend bookstore, intersection(교차로), detour(우회로, 둘러가다), theater(연극), sales clerk(점원), gas station(주유소), traffic circle(원형 교차로), parking lot(주차장), pedestrian crossing(횡단보도), center(중심) Last week I drove to London by car. As there was an accident on the M25 I had to take a center. I stopped in front of a to ask for directions. A young man told me to turn right at the intersection and ask again at the detour. There a friendly sales clerk told me to take the second exit of the traffic cicle. After I had passed a gas station I saw a and a large parking lot. I parked my car there and walked to the pedestrian crossing of London.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   Thank you so much for trying your best. Though, you didn\'t got all the correct answers I still applaud you for exerting some effort. I also want to thank you for wishing me a wonderful day and weekend! I also hope that you\'ll have a memorable days ahead.   Anyway, please go over the sentences and the words used. See you again on Monday! Take care!   ~Teacher Shanee   Hi Shanee!>>> Correct!I am grateful to your comment!>>> Correct!I want you have a happy today and happy weekend>>> I want you to have a happy day and weekend as well.bookstore, intersection(교차로), detour(우회로, 둘러가다), theater(연극), sales clerk(점원), gas station(주유소), traffic circle(원형 교차로), parking lot(주차장), pedestrian crossing(횡단보도), center(중심)Last week I drove to London by car. As there was an accident on the M25 I had to take a center. >>> Last week I drove to London by car. As there was an accident on the M25 I had to take a detour.I stopped in front of a to ask for directions. >>> A young man told me to turn right at the intersection and ask again at the detour. >>> A young man told me to turn right at the intersection and ask again at the gas station.There a friendly sales clerk told me to take the second exit of the traffic cicle. >>> Correct! After I had passed a gas station I saw a and a large parking lot. >>> After I had passed a pedestrian crossing I saw a bookstore and a large parking lot.I parked my car there and walked to the pedestrian crossing of London. >>> After I had passed a pedestrian crossing I saw a bookstore and a large parking lot.

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