homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
A fantastic day to you Tom!
How was your holiday?
I am excited to hear about what you did yesterday.
Yipee! We\'re down to the last day of the week again.
Thanks for sharing the information below.
I think a lot of people will be really scared of hippo and buffalo.
I appreciate that you always find time to write an essay aside from your homework.
Keep it up! Please go over the corrections below.
Talk to you in class.
Teacher Nina
was taking
>> correct ^_^
had
>> correct ^_^
has felt
>> was feeling
wanted
>> correct ^_^
has colled
>> has calling
wasn\'t
>> haven\'t been
was standing
>> correct ^_^
smiles
>> smiled
wstopped
>> correct ^_^ ( spelling check: stopped ^^)
have you been living
>> correct ^_^
The deadliest animal in Africa is not a lion and cheetah.
>> correct ^_^
>> The deadliest animal in Africa is not lion and cheetah.
It is a hippo and buffalo.
>> But a hippo and buffalo.
They killed people more than any animals.
>> They killed a lot of people more than any other animals.
They are as strong as car made of iron.
>> They are as strong as a car made of iron.
They are as fast as truck.
>> They are fast as a truck.
The horn of buffalo can reach about 1.5M.
>> The horn of a buffalo is about 1.5 meters.
The teeth of hippo can cut and crush the Nile crocodile.
>> correct ^_^
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