homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do we learn more from finding out that we have made mistakes or from our successful actions?
I think we learn more from finding out that we have made mistakes. Most people don't want to make mistakes. They try to be perfect and success while doing the mission. Successful make us happy, but we don't learn from it. On the other hand, when we mad mistakes, we are very shame and frustrate. But, while we look back of the mistakes, and try to make it correctly, it really help to improve us. Mistakes makes us learn. So don't be afraid to make mistake.
강사 첨삭
Yes, you are right!
We should learn from our mistakes.
When we commit mistake, just laugh at them.
Remember that no one is perfect.
Every mistake we have, it makes us better people.
-Teacher Chloe
Do we learn more from finding out that we have made mistakes or from our successful actions?I think we learn more from finding out that we have made mistakes.
>>Correct!
Most people don\'t want to make mistakes.
>>Correct!
They try to be perfect and success while doing the mission.
>>They try to be perfectionist in everything they do.
Successful make us happy, but we don\'t learn from it.
>>Correct!
On the other hand, when we mad mistakes, we are very shame and frustrate.
>>On the other hand, we feel asmahed and frustrated when commit mistakes.
But, while we look back of the mistakes, and try to make it correctly, it really help to improve us.
>>But, when we look back and try to correct our mistakes, we will become better.
Mistakes makes us learn.
>>Correct!
So don\'t be afraid to make mistake.
>>So, don\'t be afraid to make mistakes.
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