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Since the invention of nuclear weapons we have had a long period of GLOBAL peace and stability. Are nuclear weapons global peacemakers or killing devices?
I think nuclear weapons are killing devices not global peacemakers. Somepeople says that nuclear weapons makes global peace, because it prevent war. However, I think the nuclear weapons doesn't prevent war, it accelerate war. These days, some countries which have nuclear weapons threat other countries. I am worried about that it will be not end at the threaten. Someday they will use it, and destroy many place where we live in. The powerful weapons can be used one day, so I am assertion it is killing devices.
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Nuclear weapons are really powerful.
They may vanish the world.
Yes, you are right.
They are really killing devices.
They have been no good at all.
Anyway, have a good night.
-Teacher Chloe
Since the invention of nuclear weapons we have had a long period of GLOBAL peace and stability. Are nuclear weapons global peacemakers or killing devices?I think nuclear weapons are killing devices not global peacemakers.
>>Correct!
Somepeople says that nuclear weapons makes global peace, because it prevent war.
>>Some people say that nuclear weapons make globacl peace because they prevent war.
However, I think the nuclear weapons doesn\'t prevent war, it accelerate war.
>>However, I think nuclear weapons don\'t prevent war but accelerate it.
These days, some countries which have nuclear weapons threat other countries.
>>Correct!
I am worried about that it will be not end at the threaten.
>>So, I am worried about it.
Someday they will use it, and destroy many place where we live in.
>>Someday they will use them to destroy the world where we live in.
The powerful weapons can be used one day, so I am assertion it is killing devices.
>>The powerful nuclear weapons can be used one day and will kill many lives.
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