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Everywhere that has a movie theater is a hot place where many people visit. As watching movies is a friendly leisure activity, each person has a different taste toward the movie. In my case, I prefer movies which are amusing and entertaining rather than those are serious. The main reason is that I watch movie to take a rest or have a good time with my friends. When I am relaxing or hanging out with my friends who are full of vim and vigor, I don't want anything serious which makes us deliberate. Also, movies designed for amusement and entertainment do have lessons. Even if the movie is far from seriousness, every movie has a moral which the director wants to deliver to the audiences. Hece, I can learn a valuable lesson such as the love of family as well as be relaxed and amused. It may be true that I can make self improvement by watching serious movies. However, that is not my main aim of wathcing them. Finding morals in the enjoyment is good enough to me when watching movies.

Happy New Year, Yeojeong! Thank you very much for still doing your homework although it\'s the holidays. Here are the corrections I made for you. Keep writing! Everywhere that has a movie theater is a hot place where many people visit. >>Any place that has a movie theater is always a popular place to visit. As watching movies is a friendly leisure activity, each person has a different taste toward the movie. >>Watching movies has always been a leisure activity loved by many. But each person has a different taste towards movies. In my case, I prefer movies which are amusing and entertaining rather than those are serious. >>In my case, I prefer movies which are amusing and entertaining rather than those that are serious.The main reason is that I watch movie to take a rest or have a good time with my friends. >>The main reason why i like movies is to take a rest or have a good time with my friends. When I am relaxing or hanging out with my friends who are full of vim and vigor, I don\'t want anything serious which makes us deliberate. >>When I am relaxing or hanging out with my friends who are full of vim and vigor, I don\'t want anything serious which can make us deliberate.Also, movies designed for amusement and entertainment do have lessons. >>Also, movies are designed for amusement and even entertainment also have lessons. Even if the movie is far from seriousness, every movie has a moral which the director wants to deliver to the audiences. >>Even if the movie is far from being serious, every movie has a moral which the director wants to deliver to the audience.  Hence, I can learn a valuable lesson such as the love of family as well as be relaxed and amused. >> Hence, I can learn a valuable lesson such as the love of family while being relaxed and amused.It may be true that I can make self improvement by watching serious movies. >>Correct! However, that is not my main aim of wathcing them. >>However, that is not my main goal for watching them.  Finding morals in the enjoyment is good enough to me when watching movies. >>Finding morals while enjoying is already good enough for me when watching movies.