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2014-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 Myra

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What's the most special gift you've ever received? --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Though I have got a lot of gifts from parents, friends and wife, the most special gift I have is none other than the coated and dried four-leaf clover my younger sister gave at my twenties. Till now I keep it in my wallet. Whenever I see this clover, it is likely that the good fortune comes to me.

강사 첨삭

Mr. [이름]!
Hi there my witty student!
Happy Monday! :D

Few more days before New Year. right?
Hope you\'re havin fun now. kk ~ ^^.)

I guess this will be our last class together.. TT__TT
I actually wanna cry because you\'ve been so kind to me.
You\'re not only a great student but you always make me smile with your humor! :D
You are the best!
Thank you very much for your time with me.
I do hope you learned a lot from me.
Please do take care always.
Study more!
And lastly, always love your family.
Hope to see you in Korea!! Kkkk ~~
KAMSAHAMNIDA!! :D

_Teacher Myra_

What\'s the most special gift you\'ve ever received?
Though I have got a lot of gifts from parents, friends and wife, the most special gift I have is none other than the coated and dried four-leaf clover my younger sister gave at my twenties.
>>
Though I have gotten a lot of gifts from my parents, friends and my wife, the most special gift I have is none other than the coated and dried four-leaf clover my younger sister gave at my twenties.
Till now I keep it in my wallet.
>>CORRECT
OR: I still keep it inside my wallet.
Whenever I see this clover, it is likely that the good fortune comes to me.
>>
Whenever I see this clover, good fortune likely comes to me.

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