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2014-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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Actually, I have never think of killing somebody. Absolutely the answer is no. But if killing the innocent person means saving many other people including my family, I will hesitate and be worried. I hope that those things do not happen to me.

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Good Morning, [이름]! Thank you for this accomplished homework! Some questions might be difficult for you to answer but, always remember that those questions might help us  in the future. It might not be exactly as what we thought it could be but, the answer could be used to solve a problem that we might encounter in the future. I\'ll talk to you later. -T.Faye   Actually, I have never think of killing somebody. >> CORRECT:  Absolutely the answer is no. >> The answer is absolutely, No!But if killing the innocent person means saving many other people including my family, I will hesitate and be worried. >> But, if killing the innocent people means saving many people including my family, I will hesitate and be worried.I hope that those things do not happen to me. >> I hope that those things won\'t happen to me.

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