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Hello there TOM!!
Happy second day of the week!
Thanks for sharing your ideas about Chalice coral. ^_^
I learned something new about corals today. Hihihihi.
I want to see it someday.
Today is our last day of class this year.
Thank you so much for participating actively in our classes and for continuously studying with me.
You are on the right path in enhancing your skills. ^^ Don\'t give up!
Talk to you soon.
May the New Year give you the strength to face the challenges of life and courage to adjust the sail so as to take every situation to your stride.
Teacher Nina
He interrogated the criminals.
>> correct ^_^
I will pamper my dog.so please buy it!!!
>> correct ^_^
>> OR: I will pamper my dog, so please buy it.
I was exceeding the speed limit in the School zone.
>> correct ^_^
Chalice coral the most limited one in Korea.
>> Chalice coral is limited in Korea.
>> OR: Chalice is the most limited coral in Korea.
>> OR: Chalice is an endangered coral in Korea.
It is accurate hygrometer.
>> It is an accurate hygrometer.
Chalice coral is the most limited one in Korea.
>> correct ^_^
>> OR: Chalice is an endangered coral in Korea.
The real name of Charlies coral is chalice- Echinophyllia.
>> The real name of it is Chalice Echinophyllia.
Another one is called Chalice-Mycedium.
>> correct ^_^
This coral is very colorful becuase they have more piotein than other corals.
>> Did you mean: This coral is very colorful because they have more protein than other corals.
Lobophyllia,Fabia,Brain,Blastomussa,and symphyllia also have more protei than other corals.
>> correct ^_^ ( spelling check: protein ^^)
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