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2014-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Hello, Nina! How are you today? How's your physical condition? Let you drink a lot of water and fruits juices that are rich in Vitamin C. My eldest son's cold is going away but my youngest son's cold worsened. So my wife and I felt to get to sleep, because we took care of him. Anyway it’s only a few hours before new year. I hope that you will meet a nice guy and everything will come out all right. I will practice English and my tongue twister. Thank you for your kindness and teachings. Talk to you soon. Have a nice day.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

Oh you\'re so sweet! Thank you so much for your concern.

I\'m glad to hear that your eldest son is getting better.

I think your youngest son\'s condition worsen because of the temperature.

Just let him drink a lot of water. I feel great whenever you practice your Tongue Twister Drill.
Keep it up! I hope that your children will feel best soon.

Talk to you in class. Thanks for being a great student of mine, really.

Have a great day.

Teacher Nina


Hello, Nina!
>> correct! ^.^
How are you today?
>> correct! ^.^
How\'s your physical condition? 

>> How\'s your condition?

>> OR: How do you feel today?
Let you drink a lot of water and fruits juices that are rich in Vitamin C.
>> Drink a lot of water and fruit juices that are rich in Vitamin C.
My eldest son\'s cold is going away but my youngest son\'s cold worsened.

>> My eldest son\'s condition is getting better but my youngest son\'s colds worsen.
So my wife and I felt to get to sleep, because we took care of him.
>> Did you mean: So my wife and I didn\'t have enough sleep because we took care of him.
Anyway it’s only a few hours before new year.
>> Anyway, we only have few hours left before New Year\'s Eve.
I hope that you will meet a nice guy and everything will come out all right.
>> I hope that you will meet a nice guy and everything will turn out right.
I will practice English and my tongue twister.
>> correct! ^.^
Thank you for your kindness and teachings.
>> correct! ^.^
Talk to you soon.
>> correct! ^.^
Have a nice day.

>> correct! ^.^

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