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Unfortunately, a single person can not change the education system. I hope that a person who is diligent and talented will become the head of national education system. As a father of one kid, I want to change the Korean education system. Is it possible to reform the conventional system? Really I hope so. But I do not know what to do.
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Unfortunately, a single person can not change the education system.
>> Unfortunately, a single person cannot changed the Educational System.
I hope that a person who is diligent and talented will become the head of national education system.
>> CORRECT
As a father of one kid, I want to change the Korean education system.
>> CORRECT
Is it possible to reform the conventional system? Really I hope so.
>> Is it possible to reformed the conventional system?I really hope so.
But I do not know what to do.
>> But, I don\'t know what to do.
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