homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good noon Ms. [이름]!
It is good to know that this year has been good to you.
You were able to enjoy the time that you want.
It really shows.
Anyway, happy New Year to you!
May you have a great day!
See you later!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Is this year a good year for you? In what way or why not?
Yes, it is.
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I tried a new thing for this year.
>> correct!
Even though it was not a good result than I thought.
>> correct!
>>> or; Even though it was not good as I thought.
>> or; Even thought the result was not as good as what I have thought.
But Ive learned many things from the experence.
>> But I\'ve learned many things from that experience.
I can see the things that I couldn\'t see before.
>> correct!
>> or: I was able to see the things which I could not see before.
Maybe because I am taking one step back.
>> correct!
>> or; Maybe because I am taking a step back.
Unexpectly, I am having a break and I am doing what I want.
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I feel like I am upgrading myself.
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Through this break, I am getting powerful.^^
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