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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there!
It was little bit tiring morning, in fact. After finished the class with you, I had got to sleep again. I don't know why. I felt good when I was talking with you but spent 5 hours more(!) in a cover. I was really surprised when I was awake and realized that it was already lunch. I sleep longer than I was in the dormitory. I need to plan more meaningfully!
Then see you!
<Essay>
I believe you already know it. It is to make my body stonger and be familar with Japanese or French. I really want to accomplish all objectives I've made. However, I feel idle. What I want to do during all day is just to sleep more in a warm cover lying on the bed. Whew... what should I do? It is the matter of my will power, isn't it? My body isn't in my control!
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Well, you slept longer again today.^_^ Hahaha
Better do something about that dear.
I know it is difficult but I know that you can do it.
Well, see you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hi there!
>> Correct!
It was little bit tiring morning, in fact.
>> It was a little bit tiring morning, in fact.
OR>> In fact, it was a little bit tiring morning.
After finished the class with you, I had got to sleep again.
>> After the class with you, I went back to sleep again.
OR>> After finishing the class with you, I went back to sleep again.
I don\'t know why.
>> Correct!
I felt good when I was talking with you but spent 5 hours more(!) in a cover.
>> I felt good when I was talking with you but I spent more than 5 hours in the cover.
I was really surprised when I was awake and realized that it was already lunch.
>> Correct!
I sleep longer than I was in the dormitory.
>> I sleep longer than when I was in the dormitory.
I need to plan more meaningfully!
>> Correct!
Then see you!
>> Correct!
<Essay>
I believe you already know it.
>> I believe that you already know them.
It is to make my body stonger and be familar with Japanese or French.
>> It is to make my body stronger and be familiar with Japanese or French.
I really want to accomplish all objectives I\'ve made.
>> I really want to accomplish all the objectives I\'ve made.
However, I feel idle.
>> Correct!
What I want to do during all day is just to sleep more in a warm cover lying on the bed.
>> What I want to do all day is just to sleep under the warm cover.
Whew... what should I do?
>> Correct!
It is the matter of my will power, isn\'t it?
>> Correct!
My body isn\'t in my control!
>> Correct!
OR>> I cannot control my body.
Well, you slept longer again today.^_^ Hahaha
Better do something about that dear.
I know it is difficult but I know that you can do it.
Well, see you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hi there!
>> Correct!
It was little bit tiring morning, in fact.
>> It was a little bit tiring morning, in fact.
OR>> In fact, it was a little bit tiring morning.
After finished the class with you, I had got to sleep again.
>> After the class with you, I went back to sleep again.
OR>> After finishing the class with you, I went back to sleep again.
I don\'t know why.
>> Correct!
I felt good when I was talking with you but spent 5 hours more(!) in a cover.
>> I felt good when I was talking with you but I spent more than 5 hours in the cover.
I was really surprised when I was awake and realized that it was already lunch.
>> Correct!
I sleep longer than I was in the dormitory.
>> I sleep longer than when I was in the dormitory.
I need to plan more meaningfully!
>> Correct!
Then see you!
>> Correct!
<Essay>
I believe you already know it.
>> I believe that you already know them.
It is to make my body stonger and be familar with Japanese or French.
>> It is to make my body stronger and be familiar with Japanese or French.
I really want to accomplish all objectives I\'ve made.
>> I really want to accomplish all the objectives I\'ve made.
However, I feel idle.
>> Correct!
What I want to do during all day is just to sleep more in a warm cover lying on the bed.
>> What I want to do all day is just to sleep under the warm cover.
Whew... what should I do?
>> Correct!
It is the matter of my will power, isn\'t it?
>> Correct!
My body isn\'t in my control!
>> Correct!
OR>> I cannot control my body.
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