Homework

2015-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

1. He is the head of the accounting department. = He's in charge of the accounting department. 2. I'd like to introduce you to Lisa, our database specialist. 3. I'm a manager at Disney. (There are many managers there) 4. I'm the CEO of Herbalife International. (There is only one CEO) 5. James always does his job well. 6. You should always call the customer by his/her last name/surname, not his/her first name. 7. I remember faces very well. = I'm good at faces. 8. Do you have any business cards on you? 9. Another word for colleague is co-worker. 10. Our business is growing up. We have to hire two more people.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon once again Ms. [이름]!

Thanks for answering your homework.
You almost perfected it. But of course, I know you can do better.

Thanks for your time today and see you next time!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


1. He is the head of the accounting department. = He\'s in charge of the accounting department.
>>  correct!
2. I\'d like to introduce you to Lisa, our database specialist.
>>  
correct! 
3. I\'m a manager at Disney. (There are many managers there)
>>  
correct! 
4. I\'m the CEO of Herbalife International. (There is only one CEO)
>>  correct! 
5. James always does his job well.
>>  correct! 
6. You should always call the customer by his/her last name/surname,
not his/her first name.
>>  correct! 
7. I remember faces very well. = I\'m good at faces.
>>  good with faces
8. Do you have any business cards on you?
>>  
correct! 
9. Another word for colleague is co-worker.
>>  correct! 
10. Our business is growing up. We have to hire two more people.

>>  correct! 

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